I really like the detail you put into your writing it looks like it took you a while to write it and find pictures that match the story Keep up the good work.
Nice job on your rabbit proof fence I like how your sentence said on paragraph 1, then out of nowhere the van kicked up to 5th gear zooming over the bumps. Maybe next time you should add a question and some labels.
Hi Riley
ReplyDeleteI really like the detail you put into your writing it looks like it took you a while to write it and find pictures that match the story Keep up the good work.
Raidon
Hey Riley
ReplyDeleteNice job on your rabbit proof fence I like how your sentence said on paragraph 1, then out of nowhere the van kicked up to 5th gear zooming over the bumps. Maybe next time you should add a question and some labels.
i like they way u did your writing riley keep it up
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